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@101temptations

intersectional feminist, critical of all religion || ( pfp ac: @nightwinghater) FREE PALESTINE 🇵🇸 KEEP EYES ON SUDAN 🇸🇩

any prns/lesbian | 🇪🇬 Beigetreten Ağustos 2022
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DONATIONS, FIRST AID, FOOD, WATER ARE NOT GETTING THROUGH THE EGYPT- PALESTINE BORDER. DONATIONS ARE CURRENTLY USELESS. YOUR VOICES ARE YOUR MOST EFFECTIVE WEAPON!! DO NOT STAY SILENT. PROTEST, POST, REPOST, CALL ISRAEL WHAT IT IS; A GENOCIDAL STATE. vvv
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tj@theachilleid·
@101temptations @transrhine @hollanovvs yes... and there's a difference between reviewing a fanfiction and making a general comment about writing. i'm doing the latter, not the former, whilst telling you that i very much would critique an author (def. the writer of an original work) for this because you said i wouldn't
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hey friendly reminder when you're writing dialogue in fics you're meant to end with a comma and not a full stop/period unless an action follows. so it should look like this "I love you, Michaela," Francesca said. and not like this "I love you, Michaela." Francesca said.
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tj@theachilleid·
@101temptations @transrhine @hollanovvs why not? i would never critique fanwork but if i saw this in a novel my review would include something like "i can't tell if this was deliberate or if the author has a poor grasp on grammar, and either way it is jarring and aesthetically indefensible"
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@theachilleid @transrhine @hollanovvs artist who chooses to break design rules that their decisions are stupid, so exercise the same energy with authors who prefer to write a certain way i never denied the rule to begin with so this conversation was pretty pointless
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@theachilleid @transrhine @hollanovvs that's a completely different conversation!! you think it's stupid. and? people break grammar and punctuation rules all the time, not really up to you to go up to them and tell them whether or not it's stupid. it's up to them because they're the authors! you wouldn't tell an-
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@theachilleid @transrhine @hollanovvs for the third and last time: i am not denying that you are wrong. i am well aware of this grammar rule and where the end of the sentence lies. i know end of dialogue ≠ end of sentence. HOWEVER i am explaining why people choose to break those rules
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@theachilleid @transrhine @hollanovvs you know what man. i don't think you will ever have the capacity to understand what i'm trying to tell you. so you're right, i'm wrong, have a good day 😭😭😭
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tj@theachilleid·
@101temptations @transrhine @hollanovvs IT IS NOT THE END OF THE SENTENCE THOUGH, BY ADDING AN EXTRA CLAUSE YOU HAVE EXTENDED THE SENTENCE AND YOUR PUNCTUATION SHOULD REFLECT THAT OR YOU SHOULD END THE SENTENCE EARLIER BY REMOVING THE CLAUSE
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@theachilleid @transrhine @hollanovvs you're the one refusing to undetstand me lmaooo i'm not denying the grammar rule. it is, infact, not the end of the sentence. it is, however, the end of the sentence VOCALIZED. SPOKEN ALOUD. hence why some people, including i, prefer to break that rule in dialogue.
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tj@theachilleid·
@101temptations @transrhine @hollanovvs i was correcting what you said. it ends in a comma as if there's more to the sentence because there is. "i love you." is a complete sentence but "she said." is not, hence why if you include a dialogue tag you must attach it to dialogue via the comma. or just don't include it
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@theachilleid @transrhine @hollanovvs instead of dialogue. like.. "i love you." is a complete sentence said aloud. the comma will subconsciously let readers think the speaker is going to say more
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@theachilleid @transrhine @hollanovvs "as if there's more to vocalize" not as if there's more to the sentence lol i'm not denying grammar rules, i'm defending why people find it strange and prefer to break those rules in fictional writing it's different when the quotations is used to cite or reference something --
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zeina ☆ 🔻@101temptations·
@theachilleid @transrhine @hollanovvs no but single words have been used as complete sentences in emphasis. the end of the dialogue insinuates the end of the sentence spoken aloud so it makes sense why people find it strange that a verbalized sentence ends with comma as if there's more to be vocalized
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tj@theachilleid·
@transrhine @hollanovvs not really. does “she said” make sense as a sentence all on its own?
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@moong3nder happy chinese valentines new year black history ramadan mubarak day to everyone
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@sickmale997 @imsoprettyylike shouldn't that add to why you don't hate EGYPT enough? she didn't say anything here about hating egyptians. idk why you're taking this personally because she's talking about a sudanese victim of this bullshit fuck this country and everyone who stands in defense of its wrongs
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im literally the fucking worst friend ever someone i care about so much is venting their heart out to me and all i can muster is a fucking hug emoji a hug emoji this 🫂 thats never helped anyone in the history of the internet fucking ever nobody im entirely useless im slop
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@HardlyTimes @keaaaaley She toured in Israel like 10 years ago before the oppression of Palestinians was public knowledge among Americans give it a rest
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