
I ran a split test in 𝟮𝟬𝟭𝟵 that I thought was too simple to matter.
𝗩𝗲𝗿𝘀𝗶𝗼𝗻 𝗔: "Get instant access"
𝗩𝗲𝗿𝘀𝗶𝗼𝗻 𝗕: "Yes — show me the blueprint"
𝗩𝗲𝗿𝘀𝗶𝗼𝗻 𝗕 outsold Version A by 𝟯𝟰𝟬%.
Same product. Same price. Same page.
𝟯 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗱𝘀 on a button generated $𝟰,𝟮𝟬𝟬,𝟬𝟬𝟬 in additional revenue.
Here's what I learned — and how to apply it to every piece of copy you write:
After $𝟯𝟬𝟬𝗠+ in tracked sales, I can tell you with certainty:
𝗠𝗶𝗰𝗿𝗼-𝗰𝗼𝗽𝘆 𝗶𝘀 𝗻𝗼𝘁 𝗺𝗶𝗰𝗿𝗼.
Most marketers spend 𝟴𝟬 𝗵𝗼𝘂𝗿𝘀 perfecting their headline.
𝗭𝗲𝗿𝗼 𝗺𝗶𝗻𝘂𝘁𝗲𝘀 on their button text.
That's backwards. Here's why:
𝗧𝗵𝗲 𝗽𝘀𝘆𝗰𝗵𝗼𝗹𝗼𝗴𝘆 𝗼𝗳 "𝗬𝗲𝘀 — 𝘀𝗵𝗼𝘄 𝗺𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗯𝗹𝘂𝗲𝗽𝗿𝗶𝗻𝘁":
𝟭. "𝗬𝗲𝘀" = The customer is already agreeing before they click. It's a 𝗺𝗶𝗰𝗿𝗼-𝗰𝗼𝗺𝗺𝗶𝘁𝗺𝗲𝗻𝘁.
𝟮. "𝘀𝗵𝗼𝘄 𝗺𝗲" = Active. Visual. They're watching something happen 𝗳𝗼𝗿 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗺.
𝟯. "𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗯𝗹𝘂𝗲𝗽𝗿𝗶𝗻𝘁" = Specific. Not vague. They know 𝗲𝘅𝗮𝗰𝘁𝗹𝘆 what they're getting.
"𝗚𝗲𝘁 𝗶𝗻𝘀𝘁𝗮𝗻𝘁 𝗮𝗰𝗰𝗲𝘀𝘀" by comparison:
- Generic (every button says this)
- Passive (you're getting something, not doing something)
- Vague (access to 𝘄𝗵𝗮𝘁?)
𝗧𝗵𝗲 𝟱 𝗺𝗶𝗰𝗿𝗼-𝗰𝗼𝗽𝘆 𝗿𝘂𝗹𝗲𝘀 𝗜 𝗹𝗲𝗮𝗿𝗻𝗲𝗱 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗵𝗮𝗿𝗱 𝘄𝗮𝘆:
𝗥𝘂𝗹𝗲 𝟭: 𝗠𝗮𝗸𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗯𝘂𝘁𝘁𝗼𝗻 𝘁𝗲𝘅𝘁 𝗳𝗶𝗻𝗶𝘀𝗵 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝘀𝗲𝗻𝘁𝗲𝗻𝗰𝗲 "𝗜 𝘄𝗮𝗻𝘁 𝘁𝗼..."
Bad: "Submit" | Good: "Send me the free guide"
𝗥𝘂𝗹𝗲 𝟮: 𝗕𝗲 𝘀𝗽𝗲𝗰𝗶𝗳𝗶𝗰, 𝗻𝗼𝘁 𝗰𝗹𝗲𝘃𝗲𝗿
Bad: "Unlock everything" | Good: "Get the $1M blueprint — free"
𝗥𝘂𝗹𝗲 𝟯: 𝗥𝗲𝗺𝗼𝘃𝗲 𝗮𝗹𝗹 𝗳𝗿𝗶𝗰𝘁𝗶𝗼𝗻 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗱𝘀
Words that kill conversions: "Try", "Maybe", "Consider", "Explore"
Words that drive conversions: "Get", "Yes", "Start", "Show me"
𝗥𝘂𝗹𝗲 𝟰: 𝗘𝗰𝗵𝗼 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗵𝗲𝗮𝗱𝗹𝗶𝗻𝗲
If your headline says "double your sales" — your button should say "Yes, double my sales"
Continuity = trust. Trust = conversions.
𝗥𝘂𝗹𝗲 𝟱: 𝗧𝗲𝘀𝘁 𝗯𝘂𝘁𝘁𝗼𝗻 𝗰𝗼𝗹𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝗹𝗮𝘀𝘁, 𝘁𝗲𝘅𝘁 𝗳𝗶𝗿𝘀𝘁
Text drives 𝟯–𝟱𝘅 more lift than colour.
Everyone tests colour. Almost nobody tests words.
𝗥𝗲𝗮𝗹 𝗿𝗲𝘀𝘂𝗹𝘁𝘀 𝗳𝗿𝗼𝗺 𝗯𝘂𝘁𝘁𝗼𝗻 𝘁𝗲𝘅𝘁 𝘁𝗲𝘀𝘁𝘀 𝗮𝗰𝗿𝗼𝘀𝘀 $𝟯𝟬𝟬𝗠+ 𝗶𝗻 𝗰𝗮𝗺𝗽𝗮𝗶𝗴𝗻𝘀:
"Subscribe" → "Yes, send me the insights": +𝟲𝟳% 𝗰𝗼𝗻𝘃𝗲𝗿𝘀𝗶𝗼𝗻𝘀
"Buy now" → "Get instant access": +𝟮𝟯% 𝗰𝗼𝗻𝘃𝗲𝗿𝘀𝗶𝗼𝗻𝘀
"Get instant access" → "Yes — show me the blueprint": +𝟯𝟰𝟬% 𝗰𝗼𝗻𝘃𝗲𝗿𝘀𝗶𝗼𝗻𝘀
𝗧𝗵𝗲 𝗰𝗼𝗺𝗽𝗼𝘂𝗻𝗱𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗲𝗳𝗳𝗲𝗰𝘁:
𝟭,𝟬𝟬𝟬 visitors/day × 𝟮% conversion = 𝟮𝟬 𝘀𝗮𝗹𝗲𝘀
𝟭,𝟬𝟬𝟬 visitors/day × 𝟲.𝟴% conversion = 𝟲𝟴 𝘀𝗮𝗹𝗲𝘀
At $𝟮𝟬𝟬 𝗔𝗢𝗩: $𝟰,𝟬𝟬𝟬/𝗱𝗮𝘆 𝘃𝘀 $𝟭𝟯,𝟲𝟬𝟬/𝗱𝗮𝘆
𝗦𝗮𝗺𝗲 𝘁𝗿𝗮𝗳𝗳𝗶𝗰. 𝟯 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗱𝘀 𝗰𝗵𝗮𝗻𝗴𝗲𝗱. $𝟵,𝟲𝟬𝟬 𝗺𝗼𝗿𝗲 𝗽𝗲𝗿 𝗱𝗮𝘆.
The smallest words carry the heaviest weight.
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