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@Cyburger_ ^_^

@beforetimez Welcome backkkkk :D

sorry for disappearing life's been wild and i've been really busy. i want to write more cartwings but i'll prob stick to stuff that takes place from post paragon - finale and not much during the kings arc since i'm not the biggest fan of it atm. hope you've all been doing well!

@spokepilled and i'm seated every time

@beforetimez what my dms sound like

how it feels reading uu theories sometimes

well i say not the biggest fan it's moreso i haven't watched much of it and like the earlier parts of their friendship more. who knows maybe i'll change my mind once i get caught up. shrug

@sskklvr i try very often not to repeat the same word in two sentences in a row (besides the obvious "the" "he" she" etc etc) and it usually forces me to think outside of the box and come up w more fun imagery / vocab

genuine question since i know that some of my mutuals and followers are writers themselves, what tips do you have? can be anything... i'm just unhappy with everything i've produced recently and need some guidance. 😓

@nobrainsnobrawn sent along an invite! also replied to your dm (sorry i hadn't seen it earlier)

@beforetimez YES

thinking abt making a small disc server for fics writers/artists... reply for interestcheck?

not built for these discussions about ficwriters and criticism because i think everyone should actively want to get better at their craft by reading and going out of their comfort zones and searching out criticism. but that's just me i know other people r way more casual about it

"If you don't mind, im just curious do you plan on posting soon ik life gets super busy and all so no worries if u cant or wont 🩷" -> to put it bluntly life is genuinely awful atm. so i don't know when i'll post and i'd appreciate some understanding there beforetime.straw.page

edit by @muffinsib!

i keep thinking about this edit. something or other about how bitter nostalgia had to have been for the both of them before they reunited. all their childhood memories tainted by the fact that they both thought the other wanted him dead

i think spongs is the funniest person alive so i'm really glad he's in uu again

@mvrderonasterst ofc! hope it's at least a little helpful and that you have fun getting back into things ^^

@beforetimez hi thank you for answering my question! I really admire the way you write. i have been trying to get back to writing after years of inactivity. these are seriously good advice that i will take to heart!

"hello! i love your writing, and i was wondering if you have a progress that you follow to help you write or come up with ideas" -> got a littleee carried away... i like talking about writing. left links to the fics i mentioned in replies! beforetime.straw.page

1. velvet sea archiveofourown.org/works/73665831 2. brother to ghosts archiveofourown.org/works/77474466 3. what we deserve archiveofourown.org/works/76309006

"Please more cartwings fics I literally re read all of your works because they touch my soul" -> working on it! just been busy lately beforetime.straw.page

i know characters do have to move and change for things to stay interesting but like... uuparrot being king probably means he won't be able to stay at the potion's shop anymore... 😕

@anonmented pentar is flame but also melon is getting coached by flame at the same time. he's multitasking. but also flame is just coaching jadenman. things to consider

@beforetimez all correct except wdym pentar is flame he’s CLEARLY melon_matter bro how do u not see it :/

me and my friend zee have a theory that the pentar brother smp videos are scripted. here is our cast

@bumahhloser i felt like that when we were tweaking in vc trying to get this sorted... don't even get me started on jaden's strength smp vid with the pumpkinpire. conspiracies everywhere. everyone is the brother smp

@beforetimez This feels like something you’d have on a corkboard with red yarn everywhere