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web engineer, designer, founder @solithixx web agency
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@kamenddesign Cool the best one yet! Great analysis, there are few visual mistakes too you missed
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Beautiful visual, but a few things hurt clarity:
The headline is poetic but vague, I don’t know what Sage actually does.
The TV visual doesn’t clearly connect to ‘personalised learning paths’.
The subtext is tiny compared to the big promise, so the explanation gets lost.
Logos at the bottom help, but there’s no clear primary action or value above the fold.
Tightening those would make this look as effective as it is pretty.
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@eagledev_ Something is wrong in navbar, fonts are different for each one
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@AdamBartas And don't be demotivated, getting critics from big people means you're doing it right oke? Keep on being consistent and you'll be as great as them too!
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