Kaje

@GooseworxMusic Just trying to provide some positive feedback - although I'm not great at giving feedback, so I sincerely apologize if it sounds rude or highly critical. I'm trying to be specific with my thoughts and genuinely mean no harm. I hope this helps and that you have a great day/night!

@GooseworxMusic Hi! Attempting friendly feedback! In my opinion TADC is amazing, and without having watched ep 9 I don't know if it will be solved - but there's a lot of unanswered questions. Also, the introduction to the show felt really long - like the plot wasn't actually moving until ep 3.

With tadc wrapping up, and assuming I move on to do more projects in the future, where are some places you think I could improve when it comes to writing/directing?

@GooseworxMusic they weren't entirely necessary to watch to understand the main plot. I think adding more cliffhangers or character development, it adds more of a flowing story and gets the story moving sooner and leaves fans with more to think about.

@GooseworxMusic With the plot, each episode had their own engaging plot, but each episode up until 4 and 5 had a full ending, leaving without a cliffhanger and making each episode essentially their own show. While the events in these episodes were called back to in the future episodes,

@GooseworxMusic it goes from "Oh, I don't have my tail!" to Jax just having a tail in the next episode. With Gangle, it leaves a lot of mystery as to her past and why she drove a truck in episode 2 and was almost hit by one in 4.

@GooseworxMusic Some unanswered questions are: how did Jax get his tail back, why is Gangle associated with trucks, and how many other people there are in the circus. It leaves a lot of the plot and setting with questions and sudden jumps between episodes. With the Jax and his tail example,

Robot Master Design #MegaManDO #DesignARobotMaster Vacuumman/Cleanman (I couldn't pick a name) He's able to use different suction tools to give him different abilities, and his vacuum feet allow him to climb on walls with extreme suction. (More details in image). Design by: Kaje