Bergen Sunday

@QueenNiema6 I really like the tone and voice of your guide! It feels personal, accessible, and informal. #engl318mu

@QueenNiema6 This looks good!! I’d relate it specifically to your space if you can, and make sure you don’t leave unfinished sentences! 😊 #engl318mu

@vrenee16 Color! Fonts! How do you want to make your audience feel?? Look at spaces that have the same tone you want for your guide and use similar methods. #engl318mu

While I have all of my information in my proposal, it is really lacking that "wow" aspect! I will be adding photos through it, but I need help seeing if I can organize it in a better way, change the color for the subtitles, or what else should be added. #engl318mu

@KeidalyzC I would personally make sure that you write a paragraph explaining your method, to tell readers that these summaries are verbatum from the video. If you do that it will make sense! #engl318mu

I chose to write my data collection of each of my web spaces sectioned out in columns. Does this seem like a good way to collect and analyze my data? #engl318mu

@SnockDean What can you do to tie your project to the subject matter? If this is for sports media, can you use a font that makes the audience think of a related media space? Can you use a font that is similar to the sports illustrated font maybe? #engl318mu

@DickerAlyssa Numbered list looks good, however if it was me I would make the headings stand out more, using bold or an alternate font. #engl318mu

Does the numbered list make reading easier? #engl318mu

I’m trying to use an instructive voice, (second person) for my writing guide. Does this make sense and seem to fit the purpose of the guide?? #engl318mu

I tried to explain my methodology in the research I did, but was having a little trouble figuring out why I did what I did. Do you see anything I should add?? #engl318mu

@SnockDean I like that you identify small rhetorical choices such as punctuation and all caps! This can be easy to miss because we’re used to just writing for this class or other subjects. Good details sell the writing. #engl318mu

@amjumbel Using Prezi for your guide is an excellent idea! It should make a good linear progression while also being visually memorable! #engl318mu

I decided to make my guide through Prezi. While I have added most of my info to it, I am also planing on having a voice recording overtop. How tos for me, make a lot more sense in video form #engl318mu

@brianna_s2021 I definitely used separate documents for my items because I had to format them differently for each thing! #engl318mu

@KeidalyzC I like the colors you chosen the pastels reflect the colors of the Tasty channel. I would maybe choose a brighter blue for the background to mimic Tasty, but I like it! #engl318mu

For my data I used a bar graph to show how many posts each of the YouTube accounts I follow post monthly. I tried to use different colors and fonts to create a more attractive and eye catching piece of data. #engl318mu

@vrenee16 Using the tables sort of implies that each element is related to the next, and we don’t really know where to start. I’d maybe try and break it up a little? Also mix up color and fonts! #engl318mu

Within my "How to Guide" I have a section that is dedicate to the main things that I believe are large "what to do and what not to do" when writing a website. Is there any way I can revamp this table or possibly organize it in a better way? #engl318mu

@DevinRo37848647 I would start with a good thesis statement, summing up what you learned over the course of this class! #engl318mu

I am just now beginning my Final Twitter Reflection Essay. This may seem silly but I have NO IDEA how to start. I know what I want to say, I just don't know how to kick it off. Any suggestions? #engl318mu

This is how I’m analyzing the elements of my content analysis. Am I making clear enough connections between the facts and what they mean? #engl318mu

In making content, I’m trying to write an effective caption. Does this caption provide enough information for you to know what the content pertains to? #engl318mu

@adams_klayton A trick I use is to format everything in PowerPoint as opposed to word. It allows for more creativity. It might be too late for you to use this now, but maybe it will help you in the future! #engl318mu

@PeytonMotter Smart! I wonder if using the same 280 character limit would be effective for you? Is there something magic about that number and our attention span? #engl318mu

@jaesunrises Color and fonts have been my best friends!! Think about what choices your accounts (or related ones) make, do they use masculine or feminine fonts? Bright or muted colors? Then mimic it. #engl318mu

@hoagie_land Ooh, using sub folders is clever! I often make sub folders at the end of a semester to hold old work that I’m not ready to part with yet. #engl318mu

This is how I nest things in my folders #engl318mu