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@ymkm02 What type of feedback are you looking for?

@sapphicscult I just followed you, so I can DM If you are open to that..

@THazzan97197 ofc!!! feel free to dm me if you have any

new fic chapter hopefully coming today

@AngieStreet0615 Cool, I followed you. Are you open to DM? Would you mind if I read a few chapters and provide honest feedback?

@THazzan97197 If you read my book, absolutely, love to hear feedback from readers!

How long did it take you to finally follow your dream? I spent half my life working and managing, finally realizing last summer that it isn't what I really wanted. Now I am writing and released my first novel last month, officially an author. Now I have more years and time with my grandbabies 🩷

@Eva_Love_Story @EMMAREADS9 Umm! Would you mind if I read a few chapters and provide honest feedback? I have s free time now.

@THazzan97197 @EMMAREADS9 Emotional consistency, motive, pacing, and whether the darkness is actually doing narrative work. I'm not interested in vague praise. I want the places where the scene slips. #DarkRomance

Dark romance dies the moment the author starts managing the reader's comfort. If you're sanding down every dangerous edge, you're not writing obsession. You're writing apology. #DarkRomance #AmWriting

@hwjohnston7 @Mary_ork Nice, do you need a beta reader for honest feedback?

@THazzan97197 @Mary_ork Its with the editor.

What are you currently writing?

@hwjohnston7 @Mary_ork Nice. Do you need a beta reader for honest feedback?

@tabby_swan @Mary_ork Yay! I followed you 🤎

@THazzan97197 @Mary_ork once a week i write for the blog epic i write everyday 7/7 the other im taking seriously just now one day yes, i aspire to be, thanks a lot 🥰

@AngieStreet0615 Nice would you be open to honest feedback?

@THazzan97197 Cozy mystery! Working on the 2nd book in the series, hoping to have it ready to release mid June!

@tabby_swan @Mary_ork Wow! How do you handle multiple tasks? You must be a great writer, I guess 😉

@THazzan97197 @Mary_ork Hello! Thanks, the epic hopefully I'll finish my first draft this year 🤞, the novel maybe this year or the next, focusing more on this epic because I need it out my head!

so that was a lie. my beta reader (@THazzan97197) is fucking fantastic so I'm fixing and adding a bunch of stuff

What are you currently writing?

@hwjohnston7 @Mary_ork Is the first book published already?

@Mary_ork The second book in a grimdark fantasy trilogy.

@Xentor_Antarix @Mary_ork What draft stage are you at?

@Mary_ork I work on my sci fi parody universe "Da Dreck"

@asnauthor @Mary_ork Out of curiosity do you need a beta reader for honest feedback on your book?

@Mary_ork Final edits for Book 5 and first draft of Book 6 in my series, "The Adventures of Jack Wartnose." Several more chapters of my newsletter exclusive serial "Sapiemancy." *shrugs* I keep busy. DM if you'd like samples of either.

@MelGarciaGC @Mary_ork What other genre do you write?

@Mary_ork A submission for a senate inquiry! 🤩 and a children’s picture book

@CoscoMia27999 @Mary_ork When did you start writing, though?

@Mary_ork THE GUILT TRIP is a nonfiction psychedelic Cinderella story about how one woman moves through the survivor’s guilt of losing her clinically depressed mother at age seven. Instead of a prince at the end, she embarks on a transformative psychological journey.

@TheexRaven @Mary_ork Do you need a beta reader?

@Mary_ork My web novel, its a progression fantasy. Currently trying to put together the next arc and its going terribly thus far

@shashank__says @Mary_ork Yay! What's the word count?

@Mary_ork a mini-novel, vigilante thriller