out of a perverse and morbid sense of curiosity i put my writing through pangram and it highlighted one section of it as AI generated because of three em dashes and the phrase “into a world where”
polite exterior. like when people try to pick on kids in front of him, or try to get away without paying. things like that. then she sees the flash in his eyes, the way his smile shifts a bit. and she is reminded forcibly of why despite his fall, celestia still wants him back.
current state where he just seems so much happier and he isn't like. whatever the hell was wrong with him when he was still an angel in celestia. but as she stays in the human world and observes him, every so often she sees glimpses of the war angel he used to be under his +
have a lohenlumi concept in my head where lumine is nephilim, lohen is a fallen angel and lumine is tasked to find him and bring him back to celestia to participate in a war but when she finally finds him in the human world it turns out he hit his head too hard when falling and +
well maybe not decent guy per se, but that he’s deserving of more sympathy than lumine? if you have that interpretation then i’m actually genuinely concerned
wah just got a bunch of comments on hangman’s noose that made me wonder if the reader is reading the same story that i wrote 😭 i mean sure criticism is fair but it needs to come from a place of proper engagement… u can’t tell me that u rlly thought lyney is a decent guy
tbrh i don’t know how i used to sustain such an active presence in the past in older accs or pseuds 😭 but i do feel like as a whole lumine centric communities (on x, on discord, even the volume of fics) has been sadly on a decline
honestly sometimes i feel like maybe i should interact/ post/ engage more on my x but then i kinda like, end up speaking to myself you know. and i don’t rlly know what to say anw and that’s also one reason i stopped linking from my fics to my x account haha 🤪
@Tuna_Sensei hello! i just posted chapter 6 two days ago i think 😀 i usually update this one about once every 3 weeks as i’m rotating between my 3 ongoing fics right now