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Michael J. Fleming
@AdaAuthor
Canadian sci-fi/fantasy author & infrequent 𝕏 poster. Currently busy turning a published trilogy into something entirely new...
British Columbia, Canada Katılım Kasım 2018
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Look at this Albert Computer! A fascinating and somewhat rare machine released in '83 by Albert Computers, Inc.
This is a pretty fancy setup here that includes the main dual-floppy drive unit, keyboard, a KoalaPad graphics tablet, and analog controllers.
The Albert was an Apple IIe clone, but it was heavily upgraded to beat Apple at its own game. It included 256 colors and built-in voice recognition!
"When you're ready to buy a personal computer, it's easy to see why Albert is smarter than Apple."
Does anyone want to guess what happened to Albert Computers? This should be easy!
#RetroTech #VintageComputing #Apple

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If you are a fan of Sherlock Holmes, do not - for the love of all that is holy - watch the Robert Downey Jr./Guy Ritchie trash. Back when they came out, I lasted about 30 minutes through the first of the two trainwrecks. When Hollywood tries to "improve" literature, nothing good ever comes of it.
You won't fare much better with the four (mercifully short) seasons of Sherlock starring Benedict Cumberbatch. He’s a very good actor and the series is generally well made, but it suffers from the fatal flaw of trying to "contemporize" a Victorian-era narrative.
Instead, do this:
1. Read Arthur Conan Doyle's original stories.
2. THEN watch the beautifully produced Granada Television series Sherlock Holmes (1984–1994) starring the brilliant Jeremy Brett.


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Just 15k words until I finish the 1st draft of this manuscript. I've found doing a merciless self-review and edit of each chapter as I go has helped tremendously with direction and pacing. If I've done this right, each chapter should be readable in 15 minutes or less. #amwriting
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@MonaAnnLisa Nine volumes! What a challenge. Are you rewriting the whole series or trying to prune it down with edits?
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@AdaAuthor Love the way you share your process. Makes me feel like I am not crazy. In the process of turning a nine volume monstrosity into something that can be digested.
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After laboring over these two chapters and not liking the way they read, I started to wonder if I needed to rework the plot points altogether. It turns out a change of POV in one chapter and a change of venue in another was all I needed to make everything click. #amwriting
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Writing the 10k word transition from act 3 to act 4 of this manuscript has proven to be the biggest challenge I've ever tackled as an author. I've never labored over inline edits and revisions like this, but each day brings its little rewards. #amwriting
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After 17 days of deliberation I revised the outline and axed 36,000 words from my manuscript last night. That was harder than I thought it would be, but now I'm back on track! #amwriting
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The old books have been unpublished and the author site has been wiped clean.
I'm 100k+ words into the new manuscript and preparing for the beginning of something new in 2027.
Good things take time.
#amwriting

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@AdaAuthor Cats are good
Fluffy cats are best
If they pee everywhere
They need to have more rest
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