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P. R. Bunke

@PlumbEditor

Freelance developmental, line, and copy editor, living in trailers and ranting about hyphens. Sci-fi-, fantasy-, and romance-positive! She/her.

Boulder Town, UT Katılım Ocak 2018
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Feral ✨👁️👁️👁️
Feral ✨👁️👁️👁️@eyeteethstudio·
Yo, I've noticed people tend to be nervous about constructive criticism. So I thought I'd make an art help thread since I actually have formal training in this! (Permission to use example granted by @BidulesTruc, thank you!) Now buckle up kids its gonna be long 😎✨ (1/15)
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Feral ✨👁️👁️👁️@eyeteethstudio

@BidulesTruc 1. Ohhh ok first of all I love your art, the colors and expressions especially are just so good! 2. One thing you might want to try is integrating your backgrounds by making them more like an environment? (1/3)

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Just... no.
Just... no.@Rae_209·
@benedict_rs Visual artists study masters and sometimes copy their work before developing their own style, just as musicians play the music of others before composing their own. When I was a kid, I made up vast, intricate stories about characters from TV, film, and comics. Now I'm a writer.
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P. R. Bunke@PlumbEditor·
@Rae_209 @benedict_rs You wrote this all out so thoughtfully and clearly, thanks for this amazing defense of fanfic :D
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Just... no.
Just... no.@Rae_209·
@benedict_rs So in conclusion, if you're an aspiring author who wants to learn to play in someone else's sandbox before building your own, fanfic can be a great way to do that. And if you just want to take existing IP and add more gay sex or whatever, by all means, get yours.
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P. R. Bunke@PlumbEditor·
@NoComplicado @FoldableHuman A good sex scene, by that logic, should be sexy/romantic/intimate while moving the narrative forward. Lots of sex scenes aren't what i'd define as "good," but that's a quality of execution rather than an inherent property of sex scenes.
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Not Complicated
Not Complicated@NoComplicado·
@FoldableHuman comedic scenes are funny while moving the narrative forward action scenes are exciting while moving the narrative forward show me a sex scene that does anything at all for the story if you just wanna watch hot people bang, there are entire sites for that
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Dan Olson
Dan Olson@FoldableHuman·
Why is "sex scenes are pointless" a storytelling take that I see every other day now? Do I need to explain smut to you? Is that where we're at? I need to inform you that a lot of people find it fun to watch sexy people mime some hot banging?
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P. R. Bunke@PlumbEditor·
@Nessagirl07 @chancefisher20 @_M_Piper @JoeBiden In Utah even if you don't have ID you CAN request a provisional ballot at the polls today. Ask them to tell you how to follow up and you may have time to get the documents you need after you cast your provisional ballot. ACLU hotline 866-OUR-VOTE might help!
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VanessaFord🦋
VanessaFord🦋@Nessagirl07·
@chancefisher20 @_M_Piper @JoeBiden No I have to mail it in because I don’t have a valid license. I will reach out to the county clerks office to see if I can bring the other form of I’d and get registered.
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Joe Biden
Joe Biden@JoeBiden·
Utah — today is the last day to register to vote online. After today, you can register when you vote early in-person or at the polls on Election Day. Head to iwillvote.com/UT to get registered.
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Kammie Zindel
Kammie Zindel@Kammie_ka_Z·
@VoteDarlene @UtahGov I tried to call the number from my ballot and they said they can’t tell me if they’ve counted my ballot until the polls close tomorrow.
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Kammie Zindel
Kammie Zindel@Kammie_ka_Z·
Why won’t @UtahGov tell me if my vote has been counted prior to Election Day? I’d like to know if my blue vote is being suppressed in a highly red state and sadly I do not trust this process.
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Dave McKenna
Dave McKenna@djmckenna00·
Something I've learned while in law school is about the social construction of crime. I work in a legal clinic on wage theft cases, where employers have "improperly paid" workers by not paying, paying below min wage, withholding overtime, paid sick time, etc. 1/
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Lillian Boyd
Lillian Boyd@herelieslill·
i love it when writers are like “buhhh i should just write ROMANCE, it would be so much EASIER” as though writing a good sex scene isn’t the hardest and most terrifying thing they could ever attempt in their whole fiction-writing lives
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Morgan Wright 💎
Morgan Wright 💎@byMorganWright·
#WritingCommunity: I just read another article advocating for the “Show, don’t tell” advice you tend to hear a lot. Tell me... do you agree or disagree with this advice? Why? *Share your replies in the comments below😁* #writerslife #amwriting
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P. R. Bunke@PlumbEditor·
Megan: "The wifi in this coffee shop is like girl pockets. Just for show."
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P. R. Bunke@PlumbEditor·
As I write the outline for this #darkfantasy novel, I can't help but realize how all my plot and fight scene inspiration, consciously or unconsciously, comes from Avatar the Last Airbender. #ATLA, still the greatest show ever.
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Ellen is at the Grammar Table
Ellen is at the Grammar Table@GrammarTable·
Twice this year I've been asked about a question of the format "May you [insert task]?" For example: "May you edit this memo before I send it?" "May you meet with me tomorrow?" I'd never heard this usage before. Are others of you encountering it, and do you know its origins?
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P. R. Bunke@PlumbEditor·
@grammartable It sounds wrong to my gut, but that doesn't mean anything but "do more research." "May I?" is common, but... It also sounds fine as a statement/wish instead of a question: "May you have good fortune." Is there a rule that says it could be used only in those contexts?
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