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Here’s the student’s final draft. To make revision more intentional and effective, students were required to highlight where they made changes. Their revisions focused on adding appositives and expanding “kernel” sentences where needed.
I’m fully sold on strategies from @TheWritingRevol and the Hochman Method. It’s clear as day now: when we write to learn, we also learn to write. I can and should teach students to write effectively while building their knowledge of the world. These aren’t competing goals—they’re complementary. Each strengthens the other.
More to come.

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We’re getting ready to revise our single paragraphs on the refugee journey using @TheWritingRevol Hochman Method. First, I didn’t realize what I didn’t know about the distinction between revising and editing 🤯—a total paradigm shift for me. Next, I’m prepping students for revision by marking their rough drafts where they’ll add appositives and expand “kernel-ish” sentences with essential detail. This is where the sentence-level instruction I’ve been doing is really going to pay off.
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