Plain Runner

Five years in the making… I am excited to announce my first novel, "Travel By Star" is available today in paperback (details in the replies). Inspired by the works of C.S. Lewis and Louis L'Amour, it is a story of fallen days and homeward hopes. Of sons adrift, and prodigal daughters. And what it takes to find the way back. Many good friends, both in in real life and here on X, have helped bring this book to completion, but I want to especially thank my editor and layout designer @JohnBLeonard for his faithfulness and friendship. A lot of life has passed since we first began. We are finally here, brother. I also want to thank once more my brilliant cover artist, @BarbaraBrendt. She showed me what these characters could be. More than that, she believed in me. I am forever grateful for her talent and her kindness. I only wish I could write faster so that I might be able to work with both of them again. Sincere thanks, as well, go out to @HeidiAHill1 and @KingAriPress. They were among my first writer friends in the world of social media and I was blessed to happen upon such steadfast encouragers. To everyone else who has befriended me here, offering timely advice, or a gentle query, or a friendly jab in the side - and to those of you who gave your time to my short stories - you are deeply appreciated. I hope you enjoy this story (at last). More than anything, I hope you come away from it resolved to fight your own good fight, and to run well, even into the sunset, knowing its light will reach back to draw you on. Thank you, all, truly. To the City!

I have no idea what this means, but I thank God he has been my sea wall. I know whatever waves reach me are meant for my good. In the last month alone I’ve run the gauntlet from… “I’m losing my job?” “I don’t want to lose my job.” “Screw it!” “But, what about the things I still need to do?” “We’ll be alright.” “Man, this is going to be hard.” “I have no idea what to plan for.” “Oh, screw it. Again!” “Maybe I could write full time.” “I can’t even break 1000 followers, what makes me think I can write enough to live on?” “I can’t lose my job.” “Time for that checkup. Remember, both your parents died from this.” “Lord, I’m just a little nervous.” “Honey, I’m sorry I’m not quite the rock I need to be.” “I’m loved. We’ll be alright.” “Do I even remember how to write?” “So… I’m not losing my job?” “Not yet…” “What does that mean?” “It means, ‘Not yet.’” “I’m happy? Tired? Confused?” “Breathe. Pray.” “But this second novel still sucks.” “Keep praying. Work. Wait.” “How long, Oh, Lord?” “Yes, I will trust You.”

@KingAriPress @ETHYSTSkincare @jbienkahn So, what you’re saying is I should get an indie publisher. 😉

@ETHYSTSkincare @jbienkahn It will. I mean, it won't really matter because Self Publishing is convoluting the content offered, and only Indie Publishing is actually growing. I will say, the average person won't be easily able to discover it. And this author just opened herself up to a lawsuit.

This is extremely big and public and humiliating for this writer, but just know: I’m also privately cancelling each and every writer who pitches me with AI (and I’m sure many other editors are too)…

@TheMiddleborne Makes writing the sequel real easy.

@plainrunner2 They just always do the right thing. Never struggle, don’t make mistakes or second guess themselves, don’t grow through trial and hardship and learn to trust one another and the One who worked things according to His will.

We’re out here. My own arrow in the volley, “Travel By Star” has a bit of rough language, but nothing profane. It deals with real loss and the fallout of sinful choices. It holds a mirror up to a hard world different from ours, but not where it counts. It’s not ashamed to tilt that mirror upward, if only enough.

@TheMiddleborne Yeah, pure as the driven snow they are.😒

@plainrunner2 But your characters don’t have any moral problems like sleeping with married people or getting sex for favors and stuff

@whodamoose @musings_blonde @Dirtdragonmom Seriously.

@musings_blonde @Dirtdragonmom I don’t know, she follows me, she must not be THAT picky 😅

I follow back for 2 reasons: 1- my friend Beth (@Dirtdragonmom) follows you. Sounds weird, but I trust her judgement… she’s picky 😂 2- You follow me and interact with my posts positively 2-3 times. If you check one of those boxes & I’m not following you, let me know 🙂

@Chronodendron It’s been awhile since I tried, but pretty sure I still have the wherewithal (at 51). Next time I’m outside and no one’s looking. 😅

Who here over the age of 40 can still do handstands?

@MichaelFKane Love to you and yours, brother. A spirited man… Sounds like the apple doesn’t fall far from the tree.

Woke up to find this simple story about my granfather has found some legs. I appreciate the kind words, everyone and I hope the atory brought a smile to your face. 🙂

My grandfather is entering the final days of his life. He's 95 and he's ready to go home to his maker. But I thought I would tell a funny story. My mother and grandmother and I spent last night at the ER with him. About midnight the overnight hospitalist (doctor that treats patients while they are in the hospital) comes into the room. Talks to my grandmother and I for a few minutes and then begins to do a basic cognitive test on my grandfather. He starts with a simple question. "Can you tell me your name?" Now my grandfather (whose name is John) has slowed with age, but until the last few days has remained sharp, and if he has enough energy, a joker as well. He looks at the doctor, and while the confusion of his current ailment slowed his response, he eventually manages to confidently say "Juan." The doctor looks at him, then glances at my grandmother and I to see that we are laughing, before deciding that, yes, my grandfather despite his struggles managed to make a joke out of the test. He laughs. "Well I admit I was expecting a Juan to look at a little more Mexican." (My grandfather is the source of the red hair in my family and couldn't possibly look any less like a Juan) Long pause from my grandfather as he processes that. "Si." The doctor proceeded to casually call him Juan the rest of the night. A day later the decline has worsened and the end has drawn near. I passed by the doctor in the hall on the way into the ICU, had a quick chat with him about my grandfather, and then he told me that he'd never forget the 95 year old red head claiming he was Juan during a cognitive test. May we all manage to be so memorable in our last days. 😅

@pauljpastor Love that expression.

A challenge for you—for one week, do not “water the weeds” by engaging any content that is negative, artificial, cruel, or anxious. Instead, like, watch, read, and share *only* what is beautiful, human, true, and good. See what happens.

@_DavidMorrell @DaveBuzan Well, I can’t be calling myself a Western-Fantasy author and not read this!

I’m a big fan of Westerns. My debut novel, FIRST BLOOD (Rambo), was inspired by Westerns and my Western novel, LAST REVEILLE, was inspired by Sam Peckinpah’s classic Western movie, THE WILD BUNCH. davidmorrell.net/books/last-rev…

@DaveBuzan Does the closing shot of “Split” count? I don’t think I’ve ever been that stupidly grinned up by a movie in my life.

@MichaelFKane Yeah… As I’ve been working on Book 2, I occasionally find myself asking, “Wait, did I already use that name?”

@plainrunner2 From thr practical standpoint, the only thing I regretted not recording by volume six of After Moses was not having a master character list. I was forgetting a few minor characters by the end. I'll be keeping a character list this time.

Them: You must have a Lore Bible. Me: First off, this is an archaeological dig on another world, so watch your step. Second, it’s a treasure hunt with a map that was torn in half during a desperate escape which I only remember in scattered dreams. Third, it’s a Library tour in a city that makes Alexandria look like a malfunctioning smoke alarm. Fourth, it’s an age spanning drama in which I’ve only met a handful of characters, and they’re not always forthcoming. Fifth, it’s a spiraling song whose instruments I’m still learning to play, calling for a voice that is still finding its strength. Last of all, some of my best inspirations come from tying up seeming contradictions. This is an adventure, my friend. We’ll get there when we get there, and no, I won’t know where ‘there’ is till it’s written. But I’d love for you to come along.

@DaveBuzan @hatfieldtweet You guys are the best.🥹

@hatfieldtweet @plainrunner2

Stop digging for reading gold...this is the Mother Lode:

@hatfieldtweet Thanks, brother.

@deadalnix @TheMiddleborne I hear this. I guess I was picking up on a more modern accommodation vibe throughout the film, so it didn’t surprise me.

@plainrunner2 @TheMiddleborne Imagine throwing a fit as your man subdue the emperor of the galaxy who offer a political alliance to seal the deal. Even without reading the books. She has the political acumen of a cucumber and is a liability to Paul in the movie. That character as written doesn't work.

Just every time the camera goes to Chani it completely breaks the scene. She’s insufferable in this.

@Dolly__gale @RedHedgedragon @DavidRoomeAuth @MichaelFKane @TheMiddleborne I appreciate it. Thanks.

I read several Frank Herbert books in high school: Dune Dune Messiah Children of Dune I wish I'd just stopped with the first one, which had a unique world, political intrigue of warring aristocratic houses (planets), some key words of Arabic, and some philosophical reflection on fate and free will. It also had a hero's journey in a new land, which was fascinating. I suppose it's an example of the cliche, "I'm thirteen and this is deep." But it's a good example. The first two recent Dune films end here. The second book lacks much of the political intrigue I liked about the first. The philosophy angle was okay, but I didn't feel like I was learning much. The hero's success from "Dune" is inverted, which is the author's perogative but I didn't like reading that. The third book took a strange turn toward the end over the course of two paragraphs or so. I reread the chapter incase I missed something. The series entered a subgenre of scifi that was quite unlike the first book. I stopped at that point. I've heard that many people stop after that one. I'll bet that the "Dune 3" film combines elements of the "Dune Messiah" and "Children of Dune." This doesn't specifically address your questions, but that's my take.

Alright, my sci-fi friends (looking at you, @RedHedgedragon, @DavidRoomeAuth, @MichaelFKane, @TheMiddleborne), I have enjoyed the first two Dune movies as such, and I’ll be there for the third. However, I honestly don’t see myself getting to the books any time soon. The reading and writing stack is just too high at the moment. So, tell me (without too many spoilers), what are the major differences I’m missing out on? Also, I’ve heard rumors that Herbert wrote Messiah to counter the interpretation many fans were coming up with for the first book, so would love to hear more about that. And, lastly, seeing as how most of my sci-fi knowledge extends to Star Wars, what influences and overlaps do you see there? Go.

@MichaelFKane @RedHedgedragon @DavidRoomeAuth @TheMiddleborne I knew I could count on you. This is so helpful.

So like David I think most of the changes 'work' as well. Chani's changes are the most frustrating for me but maybe not for the same reason as others. Paul Atreides is a tragic hero. He spends much of Dune trying to avoid a bloody war and ultimately there isn't a route around it. He must embrace and subvert the plans of the Bene-Gesserit witches, become the Fremen messianic figure, and become emperor. And it is tragic. The Atreides men are the only Good men in the universe. This is evident in how their captains love them rather than fear them in Dune's barbaric feudal society. And Paul is forced to become a tyrant. The alternative is a Bene Geserrit controlled Harkonen Emperor that (to Paul's visions) lead to humanity's eventually extinction. So he has to become a tyrant. The Chani change is so jarring because she is the only happiness in the book ending. Paul's destiny force him to marry Peincess Irulan, but in the book the final scene is a quiet one between Jessica and Chani where Jessica comforts Chani. Both women were forced to be concubines of political men. Men that loved them dearly but had other obligations. But Jessica reminds Chani that the princess will lead a cold and lonely life, never to be touched by her husband. She says that history will remember that Jessica and Chani were the real Atreides wives. And the book ends right there. The movies ending is much darker and more ominous as result of chani leaving (and I have no idea how they course correct, because all huge part of the plot of Dune Messiah is that Chani has been barren for all across the time jump) So most of it I think is pretty good. I do think the tone of the ensing is altered substantially though.

@EidolonOracle @RedHedgedragon @DavidRoomeAuth @MichaelFKane @TheMiddleborne That’s a good summary. 👍

Oh boy that could be at least three different essays. You are missing out on Chani being a supportive partner who believes in Paul, the weirdness of Alia being born with adult consciousness and playing a pivotal part in the conclusion of Part 2, deeper themes of religion and institutional pressure, exploration of prophesy realized and the even more despicable depravity of the Harkonnens. Also a fair bit more ecological details and parallels to contemporaneous Middle-east oil wars. The claim that Messiah is meant to counter bad reading of Dune is overstated retcon not supported by Herbert’s own words. But Herbert did not completely understand his own work. Dune is a primary source inspiration for Star Wars with desert planet, pseudo-religious order of magical priests, sword fights + lasers and a messiah 1 generation late all all directly passed through.

@DavidRoomeAuth I’ve heard that, which is why I haven’t taken the plunge. Honestly, I’m a slow and distracted reader as it is, but I feel like the films are pretty accessible without being watered down.

@plainrunner2 @RedHedgedragon @MichaelFKane @TheMiddleborne It's been awhile since I read Messiah and longer since I read Dune. The books are very weird. Messiah is philosophical and depressing and I haven't read further...