R. Hall

who’s a friggatriskaidekaphobe?

Let me turn up the heat with my Paranormal Thrillers! Click on the link to start reading. All books are listed on Amazon. #BookTwitter #readers #paranormal #Supernatural #Romance #thrillers #DarkFiction amazon.com/Lorraine-Carey…

Blossom is ridiculously photogenic when she wants to be

Out Now on #Amazon #KindleUnlimited #kindlebooks #NowComesGrim (Book 1 of NCG Series) #WhispersOfPower (Book 2 of NCG Series) #WolvesAmongPrey (Book 3 of NCG Series) Get your copies today… (Links in reply)   Coming Soon to #Amazon: Two Blankets, Two Pillows (a Bio of two legal Chinese immigrants to America)   Unseen. Unheard. Unbroken. (An autobiography of Grim)    Please Follow if you are an Author or 1A/2A.   @StrytellinJerry @grimbooksllc @RaelleLogan1 @jayson_lindseth @DougProducer @MotherCombs @SempaiGreg @M_Cobbett71 @thetaoishway @MozPerkins @lisamariehaden @LydiasElizabeth @tweeterforyou2 @thevoguewriters @davepperlmutter  @Sowerbutt #readersoftwitter #WritingCommunity

@Michelle4Laughs Can't tell you how excited I am at this!

New client alert! I'm thrilled to be joined by @Stellerex64 with his adult mystery that blew me away. Not only did it leave me guessing about suspects, but the characters are bursting with personality and there's enough thriller elements to put me on the edge of my seat!

The reawakened I worked so hard on this piece because it resonates with me. Sometimes we lose our spark and it takes us a long time to be happy again to bloom and go out in the open again, I wanted something to remind me that I’d find my spark again. #commissionart

@ianamikagautam The Three Faces of Harper Morris

Book titles without context are my favorite. Post your book title & let everyone guess the plot.

Siegecaster, an active skill-based siege defense game, is available now! This was a personal project created with a small team, and my friends say, "I was playing it to be polite, but then it was four hours later, and I actually liked it!" All RTs appreciated!

@oh_reeeeally @P_Kallioniemi lol. The line for Trump goes from the middle of his head to the back of his tailbone, while the line for Zelenskyy goes from behind his head to his thigh. They’re both leaning in, regardless of what angle some moron drew the lines, just to they could invent a narrative

@StephenRDona To be sure, there were also unnecessary paragraphs and scenes, which I wrote because I liked how they sounded. But looking at them critically, they weren’t furthering plot, subplot, character development, or anything useful

@Stellerex64 That’s great to hear! 💡 Editors always push us to refine and tighten our work. It’s interesting how feedback often leads us to rethink previous chapters. How are you finding the balance between adding more depth and maintaining efficiency?

@StephenRDona In my case, it was easy enough to take an objective look at my writing style. I’m cutting with a scalpel, not an axe. Replacing adverbs with stronger verbs, rephrasing passive voice, removing unnecessary phrases and words, dialog tags. It all adds up

Done with the edits. Now on to the next stage: looking for beta readers

SpaceX launch, as seen from my driveway

Whitney Stone returns from Paris to find herself promised to the arrogant Duke of Claymore, Clayton Westmoreland, instead of her childhood sweetheart. As passion ignites between them, Whitney struggles to hold onto her dream of perfect love.

and now it’s time for the Query slog #writerslife