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42 Calls Booked in 30 Days for an eCommerce Client (Without any BS personalizations) — let's break down the email copy strategy:
First, I just want to emphasize that eCommerce as an industry for cold email is TOUGH. On average we see reply rates between 1.5%-3% when targeting these brand owners, which is near half of what we see in other industries.
(This is likely due to the fact that they're consistently hit by everybody and their grandmother's email marketing agency 10x per day).
But... we used that to our advantage — this offer was different, and very difficult to replicate, meaning it served as a breath of fresh air in the inbox.
Here's the breakdown:
💎 Key #1: Natural Language
Everyone is tired of the "Hormozi Style" offers, "We'll help you accomplish X result in Y days, using Z unique mechanism".
It screams that they're being sold to, when in reality, what people really want is an authentic conversation.
To accomplish this we leveraged a Chat GPT prompt, ensuring that the new version of the copy maintained brevity and kept the core offer and messaging intact.
It's worth noting that these "core offer aspects" were still included in the copy, but they were spread out in a way that came off much more natural.
In the end, the copy looked more like an SMS from a friend, rather than a traditional cold email.
💎 Key #2: The "It's Sort of Like" Line
This one requires props to @RyanBrydenn who first introduced this idea to me in one of the guest workshops he did for @clientascension.
This line comes shortly after introducing the main offer and allows you to make a complex idea sound simple by comparing it to one or two familiar things, but elaborating on the difference:
"It is essentially like X..." or "It's sort of like X..."
"...but without Y"
This also reinforces the conversational tone of the email, rather than just throwing an offer at the prospect's face and expecting them to understand.
💎 Key #3: The Dual Layered CTA
Layer 1 — Instead of your typical direct "Have 15-mins to chat?" style CTA, we wanted to lead with value, offering our own spin on a free consultation.
(Normally, I'd avoid things like free consultations or free audits, as you have zero authority when offering these to a cold audience, however, in our case the authority/info my client's were willing to share was obvious in the copy)
Layer 2 — The second layer is where the magic happens. We elaborated on why this offer or consultation would be valuable to the prospect, even if they weren't ready to buy at this moment (and introduced a bit of humour while we were at it).
"Even if you're not ready now, it might be worth it just to xyz..."
This relieved any potential sales pressure, and reinforced the value in what my client's were providing on the call.
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TLDR; Be authentic and natural, keep message clear, and reinforce value.
Shoot me a DM if you want to hear more about this campaign, or if you want help getting results similar to this.

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